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Post by "Rated R Superstar"Edge on Oct 10, 2006 22:00:33 GMT -5
**A ladder is seen standing in the middle of the ring.The crowd are on their feet to see who is coming out,Smoke fills the entrance ramp as Edge appears through the smoke,he runs to each side of the entrance stage trying to fire up the crowd.He continues down the entrance ramp and slides in the ring and demands a microphone and begins to monologue.**
Edge:Rob you think you Mr.Monday night,the whole fucking show.Wrong your just a hippie,RVD.
**Doing the R-V-D sign and begins to laugh.**
Edge:Rob this is your first return match I defeated Raven at the return of NHBWO.All I have to do to win is climb the ladder.
**Begins to climb the ladder.He then turns around and sits on the top.**
Edge:As I was saying you can't beat me Rob I am undefeated and you are basically a jobber to me this is your return match.
**He takes off his Rated R Superstar vest,and returns to monologue.**
Edge:See this,this means I have the right to teach you the meaning of Rated R.There is no one to save your ass and I mean no one.
**Edge puts his vest back on,He climbs down and closes the ladder with he then just drops the ladder.The ladder falls with a loud noise.**
Edge:That is all I got and since I don't like to hang around I'm going to my hotel suite.
**Edge kicks the ladder under the ropes and slides out of the ring and climbs on top of the security wall and takes off his vest again and throws it up for the crowd to catch.He then jumps on the opposite side of the ring and continues fighting his way through the crowd to get to his hotel room outside of the arena.The screen fades black and NHBWO then goes to commercial break.**
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Post by I'll Set Your Soul on Fire on Oct 12, 2006 21:55:26 GMT -5
As I said on SNME, try to make it Bold instead of the **, make your speech in a certain color, and center it if you could, looks more presentable.. Also, try to make your guy speak more, there are 5 peaking lines in the RP.. But, I have to say, come hell and high water, your getting better..
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